"Ignite the cannons,"
Roared the fierce, ugly captain.
"Arrggggg!" realised the scruffy, deadly crew,
Treasure as sparkly as the sea in summer,
Every pirates dream come true.
Nathan - a wonderful, colourful piece of poetry. Your mum tells me you worked really hard, and even used a dictionary to look for words that begin with "i". Well your hard work has paid off!! I am particularly impressed with your simile :) and also your interesting punctuation.
Top Dog Homework Nathan - Arrggghhh Grreat work me hearties!